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Genre: Fiction · Poetry, Free Verse · Flash / Short Story

Length: 8,672 words

Looking for feedback on: Big picture / overall direction, Places that are unnecessary and can be cut, Line-level writing/line edits, Emotional impact, Clarity and flow

Writer note: Early draft. I'm mostly worried about certain sections coming across in a way I don't intend, things not makings sense but in a way that provokes little thought or emotion, and certain sections weakening the overall. Ideally, I'd like to know what is impactful and what dosen't stick. Any edits, no matter how harsh would be amazing, line edits, general direction, what to cut, grammar, endings, starts, and more. The more detail the better.

Requests open: Yes

Genre: Nonfiction, Personal Essay / Memoir · Creative Nonfiction

Length: 526 words

Looking for feedback on: Opening / first pages, Emotional impact, Big picture / overall direction

Writer note: Polished draft

Requests open: Yes

Genre: essay

Length: 1,500 words

Looking for feedback on: Dialogue, Opening / first pages, Line-level writing/line edits

Writer note: Early draft

Requests open: Yes

Genre: Fiction, Magical realism

Length: 2,700 words

Looking for feedback on: Big picture / overall direction, Clarity and flow, Character or voice, Opening / first pages

Writer note: Early draft. Excerpt from still work in progress short story - thoughts on prose style needed and initial characterization

Requests open: Yes

Genre: poetry

Length: 101 words

Looking for feedback on: Places that are working well, Character or voice, Structure and pacing, Emotional impact, Big picture / overall direction

Writer note: Polished draft

Requests open: Yes

Genre: Play

Length: 1,728 words

Looking for feedback on: Big picture / overall direction, Emotional impact, Places of confusion, Character or voice, Line-level writing/line edits

Writer note: Pre-submission

Requests open: Yes